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Apocalypse
Apr 15, 2005, @ 05:04 PM
The Fall of Hiigara



Chapter 1: Strange things



He looked at the chronometer on the panel in front of him, 11:45pm it beamed at him in almost a taunting manner. All was quiet, Flo wasn't suprised, it was always quiet. Flo was on the late shift, aboard the communications platform out in the far reaches of the LSC borders. The platform's job was to monitor any kind of activity within it's radius but Flo knew there wouldn't be any activity, he knew there wouldn't be as much as a blip on the radar. In fact, there had been no activity of any note along the ever increasing line of the LSC borders since the last great war. Yet the Grand Admiral of the LSC forces insisted on round the clock surveillance. So Flo found himself moved from the fleet he served under to this little cushy number, or so it was promised to be. He looked at the chrono again 11:50, God this is dull, what I would give to be back in the fleet he thought to himself, not for the first time. Tank will be here soon, then I'll have a nice drink before getting my head down I think. Flo gave the instruments a last check, as he always did before the changeover, yet again nothing came up. All systems normal, no activity detected. He stood up and looked out the viewpoint into the vast space that surrounded him.

In another region of space, above a desolate planet, the LSC-Redemption sat in orbit, so peaceful were the surroundings that the huge Battlecruiser almost looked to be sleeping. All that could be seen on the planet below was grey and brown landscapes, the occasional flash of searing blue could be seen as the planet's storms raged across its surface in an uncontrollable fury. On the bridge of the Redemption stood Commander Harbison, ''Drunk'' to those close to him. He was standing towards the communication section idly looking out into space through the main view screen, Christ if I wait any longer I'm gonna go insane 'Comms, any news from the ground team?' he enquired struggling to hide the boredom that threatened to break his mind.
'Negative sir, they will be checking in within the hour' was the reply.
Drunk sighed, Why am I stuck out here in the middle of no-where trying to find a construction crew that's gone AWOL? they probably had too many drinks one night and got themselves lost on some damn late night expedition. I didn't train all my life to baby-sit every damn person who goes missing! He fumed to himself. Actually he knew it was a little more serious than that, seeing as the construction crew consisted of a little over 130 people. 130 people simply don't vanish after one drink too many, especially 130 people who were supposed to be working on a strategically important new sensors array, a sensor array that would fill a gap in the defensive perimeter of the LSC's borders.

The comm channel fizzled into life as the ground crew finally called in. The comm's officer strengthened the signal to try and reduce the static that was running riot through the speakers. 'Go ahead Ground team, the Commander is present' the comm's officer spoke into his headset.
'This is ground team alpha, we've inspected the site and it's a ghost town' the Ground leader went on ' Definite signs of small arms fire down here plus what looks likely to be orbital strikes. Whatever happened down here happened fast, we missed it'
Gunfire, orbital strikes? What the hell? 'Any survivors, Sergeant?' Drunk enquired.
'None found as yet, sir, permission to continue the search, sir?' The Sarge replied.
'Granted' Drunk turned to his 2nd in command 'What do you think, Black?'
'I think sir, we should prep the fighters for launch and move the ship's status to alert, If there is a ship out there then it would be wise to be ready to intercept it' Lieutenant Commander Blacksand replied.
'I think whatever happened has passed but it would be a wise move indeed to be prepared for the unexpected, Black, you have your orders' Drunk returned.
Lt.Co. Black saluted and went to his station to issue the orders across the ship. Drunk stood there for a moment, deep in thought. After a short time he turned around and headed for the Commander's chair. After another even shorter pause he spoke with all the authority deserving of him, 'Comms, as soon as is able, I want a message relayed to the ground team, Have them set up a base of operations about 5km from the site and monitor all activity, if any, until further orders'
'Yes sir' the comm's officer replied leaking just a hint of high respect for his commander.
'Also send a coded transmission to the Grand Admiral, send this message..........'.

It was the middle of the night on Hiigara, when the Grand Admiral was woken by the internal comm system Oh this better be good or someone's gonna be washing my briefs for the next 6 months!!
The Admiral stumbled out of bed and tried to fumble his way across the room to the comlink Stop that damn noise, I'm coming!!
He managed to find the comlink but stubbed his toe on some furniture he never knew was there God Damn It! I'm awake, stop cursing me like this! Who the hell put that there!
He flicked the switch on the small device and was about to launch into a titanic rant at whoever the poor soul was on the other end, when he was interrupted by a familiar voice. 'Sorry to wake you Admiral Brandt but you have received an urgent message from Commander Harbison'
'Uh, didn't I send him to investigate the loss of communicat-......' He trailed off, rubbing his eyes to try and force them open.
'Yes sir, Commander Harbison's initial report has come in and it requires your attention'
'Tom?' The Admiral was definitely getting his bearings now.
'Yes sir?' replied Admiral Fitzwater
'If this is a waste of my time, remind me to fire you!'
'Yes, will do, sir' came the reply with a touch of hidden sarcasm.
'On my way, Brandt out' he clicked off the comlink and trudged off to his wardrobe, One day I'll get a good night's sleep, one day!

Grand Admiral Brandt finished reading the report received from the LSC-Redemption, took a look at the star charts, pinpointed the system that Commander Harbison was currently situated, then sat down and thought for a moment. The Taidan, The Beast, The Vaygr? What is this? some new insurgent? 'Admiral Fitzwater?' He called out in a clear tone.
'Sir?'
'130 people are missing, presumed dead. Evidence so far suggests an attack, one by a superior force. Now...' he went on 'what are the possibilities of some remnants of the Vaygr being involved in this?'
'Highly doubtful sir, we have successfully maintained a campaign against the Vaygr and intelligence would have us believe that their forces are now seriously limited. We believe they have fled our boundaries, sir, they have nothing left, they are a broken race' Fitzwater replied.
'The Beast is no more and even if the Beast had survived against the odds, this simply isn't the same style of attack. The Taidan perished with the Vaygr fleets. Would it be safe to assume there is a new presence out there?' Brandt enquired.
'With all the evidence we have, it's certainly the likeliest explanation so far, sir' Fitzwater answered.
'Admiral, have Commander Ren take his destroyer fleet to support the Redemption, also, we may need more marines to set up a base of operations on the planet's surface, so have a carrier deployed too, which you send is your choice, you have your orders Admiral' Brandt ordered.
'Sir' Fitzwater saluted.
Intrigueing, Surely this can't be the Vagyr, not again.

Tank stepped into the observation lounge to find Flo staring out into space, a rather blank look on his face. 'What ya staring at buddy? You look ........'
'Say anything about me being old and I'll flush your remains out there' Flo interrupted 'Tank take a look here, tell me what you see?' Flo pointed out the viewport to what looked to be a normal cluster of stars. Tank couldn't see anything but the cold blackness of space.
'What am I looking at old man?' Tank said after a brief pause,
'Out there .... kinda looks like glass, I think, very faint but it's there' Flo replied, seemingly missing the ''old man'' remark. Tank looked again, various stars glittered against the black backdrop of nothingness, here and there a shooting star could be seen. Tank continued to stare, noticing the nebula in the far distance, a vast purple cloud of radioactive gases and dust. 'Sorry Flo, no idea what your talking about?'
'I'm telling you it's there, right there!' Flo said anxiously. Tank tried to follow where Flo was pointing. He could feel the uncomfortable feeling of his eyes straining ' Wait, what is that? I think I see it' Tank tried to make out the outline of what he was seeing but couldn't find one, He strained even more.
'It's small, like a stretched bubble' Flo described for him, ' But it's definitely there, you see?
'Yea, I see it' Tank answered, wondering what to do. 6 months they have been out here, 6 months and nothing, no activity or any kind. 'Have you tried to get a reading on it?' Tank asked, trying to run through the options of what to do.
'Every reading I can use, nothing. It's like it's not there but it is.' Flo replied, albeit confused.
'Wake the crew, we going out to take a closer look!' Tank broke away from the viewport and went to prep the stations only corvette.
Flo did as Tank requested and woke up the other 4 crew members. When the first walked in looking like he was just dug up, Flo followed the route Tank took. Finally we get to see something out here Flo mused to himself excitedly.

Commander Harbison was standing at the front of the bridge when Lt.Co Blacksand joined him. Drunk seemed to be deep in thought. He turned to face his friend and trusted ally ' I may be going insane with boredom here but I have this unshakeable feeling that we are being watched' He said with a trace of anxiety.
'Sir, Nothing is showing up on the read outs. Apart from the ground team, we're alone here.' Black replied.
'Commander?' The comm's officer interupted.
'Yes?'
'Incoming message from Admiral Brandt, He requests that you hold position and secure the site until further reinforcements arrive' the comms continued.
"Reinforcements? what kind of reinforcements did the Admiral have in mind, that could compare with the fully complimented Redemption?' Drunk mused out loud. At that moment several hyperspace signatures appeared on the main scanner. 'Sir, we have incoming ships, exiting hyperspace now'
'ID those ships' the Commander ordered.
'It's the Justice fleet, sir. Receiving a transmission from Commander Ren' The comm's replied.
'Put it through' A whole destroyer fleet? 130 people going missing is serious enough but is there really a need for a fleet to safeguard a dead planet?
The Justice fleet consisted of 8 frontline class destroyers headed up by the LSC-Justice, Commandeered by the Veteran, Commander Ren, the fleet has earned it's reputation through dedication over the years and it's role through the Vagyr Wars. Although the Frontline class is getting old in terms of design and firepower, they more than make up for their versatility in combat and their use in support roles. The Justice fleet was reknowned through the galaxy for it's ongoing endurance and the ability of the fleets crew to get the job done. Commander Ren himself was reknowned for being tactically sound and cool under pressure and had infact turned down many offer's of promotion to command Battlecruisers, in favour of staying aboard the LSC-Justice and her crew.
'Commander Harbison, Commander Ren here, I have orders from the Admiral to assist in securing the system. The LSC-Crossfire will arrive in a few hours to provide the materials needed to set up a long term base of operations on the planet. Any idea whats going on here? It's unusual for the Admiral to assign so many ships to one planet?'
'It is unusual but I'm sure the Admiral knows what he's doing, best not to question his motives, Commander. As for whats going on, we haven't had a report from the ground team in some hours, however the analysis so far is, 130 people go missing. Signs of a firefight and looks like they were attacked fast and hard. We can't rule out the possibilty of orbital strikes too' Drunk explained.
'Orbital strikes? The only ships we know of to have the power to use orbital strikes were the Vagyr, the remnants of which fled the galaxy on the other side of the star charts, they should be no-where near here!' Commander Ren replied.
'That we know of, but to coin a phrase, there's always the possibilty of a new player in town, Commander. Have 6 of your destroyers create a sentry perimeter around the planet, Bring the Justice and your remaining ship into formation with the Redemption. We will wait to safeguard the arrival of the LSC-Crossfire, in the meantime please feel free to come on board, I'm sure there will be a few things to discuss'
'Look forward to it, Commander' Ren answered before terminating the transmission.
Drunk turned to Black. 'Correct if i'm wrong but isn't the Crossfire the carrier that houses the Elite marine force?' He asked.
'Yes, sir, Sergeant Elysium and his men are considered the best of the best, although maybe this mission would be a little overkill to bring them here' Black replied.
'My thought's exactly, maybe the Admiral's getting paranoid in his old age. Come lets prepare for Commander Ren's arrival'

'I tell you something Flo, this corvette is in serious need of a tune up!' Tank said. Tank and Flo were heading towards the mysterious glass-like object in the station's only corvette. ' You would have thought they could have sent us some more uptodate ships, i mean this thing is a deathtrap, It's barely running' Tank went on.
'Well if only you would stop tinkering with the poor ship it would probably be in better shape!' Flo responded, getting a little weary from Tank's ongoing complaints about the ship's state of health. 'Look we're coming up on the ....' Flo stopped himself short, he realised he didn't actually know what it was they were flying to. 'the... ah....'
'Lets just call it a thing for now, eh, old man?'

Apocalypse
May 3, 2005, @ 09:24 PM
There was no end in sight to the dark tunnel he was running through, he could barely see more than 2 metres infront of him. How long he had been running for he couldn't recall but he needed to catch his breath. He eventually stopped running about 5 minutes later and propped himself up against the side of the tunnel, unholstered his firearm and checked the power. A quarter left. He tried to gather his thoughts There has to be a way out of here, I will not die down here, I can't. I have to warn the Aquitaine. So many deaths, so much hatred. The thoughts in his mind swirled around, constantly battling for priority. He listened intently in the darkness, he hadn't heard anything for about half hour. He hoped against hope that he eluded his foe. His lungs were gradually starting to accept the air he desperately tried to suck in when he heard the sound. His heart exploded as the fear threatened to consume him. The scratching sound was coming closer, he checked his gun again already knowing that it was hopeless. He fired off three successive shots into the darkness, two hitting the tunnel wall and the third slamming into something wet. A scream filled the air around him, a scream no human being could ever produce. He fired again and again until his power ran out. He closed his eyes and braced himself.
Nothing.
All that could be heard was the clicking of the trigger, he realised he was still trying to fire even though he had run out of ammo. He must have killed his pursuer, almost sighing in relief, he knew there would be more. He holstered his gun, knowing it would be useless but it made him feel just slighty better. He caught his breath and turned to run. As he turned he came face to face with the thing he feared more then death itself. In sheer terror, he could do nothing more than fall to his knees, all life draining away as the creature reared itself to strike, needle thin teeth could be seen through the creature's snarling mouth. It pounced and all he could see was those razor sharp teeth baring down on him.

Commander Sayer sat bolt upright and screamed. As he took a deep breath he took in his surroundings Not again, what are these dreams about? Why am I getting them again? He noticed his sheets were drenched in sweat and his heart was racing. He got out of bed and went to the comms on the wall, turning it on 'Nav, any news?' He spoke with a slight tiredness in his voice.
'No sir, All's quiet on the sensor's, no reports from the fleet' came the crackly reply.
'As you were' Co Sayer switched off the comms and headed to the shower unit in his quarters, He checked the time, it was still very early morning, hardly 2 hours past midnight going on Hiigaran time. I'll get myself cleaned up then rest a few hours. I'll have to go see Karen about these dreams, she may know. Yea she always seems to know.

The wailings sounds from the heavily stressed engines of the corvette died away as Tank cut the power, bringing the ship alongside the anomaly. 'Well we're here, now what?' Tank asked turning to Flo.
'Let's try and get some readings, we have to be close enough now' Flo replied. Tank got busy flicking various switches and fiddling with many buttons. 'I think I'm getting something here, hold on, yea there it is. You see that?'
'See what?
'There, Right there. There's a power reading coming from that thing, very small, almost undetectable but it's there' Tank pointed out. Flo looked at the reading and began to feel uneasy ' I don't like this Tank, something doesn't feel right about this.' At that moment the comm system crackled into life making both Tank and Flo jump 'Guys you need to head back here, we're getting some reports of two other sightings' came the voice.
Tank flicked the comms button 'Where from?' he enquired.
'Neighbouring stations, Command knows about it and seems to be very concerned' came the reply. Tank flicked a few more buttons and the star map came up on the corvettes only monitor, punched in a few co-ordinates and the sector where they were came up on screen. The station that Flo and Tank were situated flashed up in the middle and the neighbouring stations flashed up in their respective places on the map. Tank looked at it while thinking then looked up at Flo to see a similar expression as though he guessed Tank's mind. 'You know Tank, these readings from that thing are awfully similar to that of a cloaked vessel' Flo said.
'Yea, and look at these sightings and where they are, compared to us. That can't be a coincidence, Flo. It looks like we are being ........'
'Watched!' Flo interrupted 'Lets get back to the station, I suddenly don't like being here' Tank agreed and powered up the engines. The corvette began to move and turn back to the station when the engines abruptly cut out, Error essages springing up relentlessly on the monitor. 'Dammit Tank, stop messing with this ship, get in the back and look at the drives, we need to get back' Flo snapped. Tank knew better than to question Flo's authority and did as he was told. As he dissappeared to the back of the ship, Flo realised they were still close to the glass-like anomaly and the corvettes sensor's were still scanning it. Flo looked at the monitor and noticed the power readings were starting to rise. What is it doing? he thought to himself, Hurry up Tank, get this ship moving!

The Grand Admiral walked into the communication department in the main military base on Hiigara. Rows of computers were churning out information at an extreme rate. Officers rushing around trying to make sense of it all. Brandt walked over to the main viewing screen, which was showing a visual image of the ancient hyperspace gate. 'Any idea's on why it's powered up yet?' he enquired.
'We have a few, sir, it's quite possible something is coming through or already has' came the reply from the officer next to him.
'Quite possible?, why don't you find out! we're getting some unusual reports out there and i want to know what the hell is going on!' Brandt snapped.
Brandt didn't mean to snap at the poor officer, he just hated being in the dark. Too many unexpalined things were happening and no-one could tell him why. First the apparent loss of 130+ people then sightings of supposedly cloaked objects and now this, the ancient hypegate has been powered up. He knew it couldn't be Sajuuk and the Apocalypse fleet because their mission was to explore the other side and they weren't due back for another 6 months. As an afterthought, Brandt wondered what they had found. They had been gone 6 months already but currently Brandt didn't have technology powerful enough to create a passageway of communication from one side of the gate to another. He hated the thought of Hiigara's most formidable fleet being so far away but only Sajuuk was capable of taking ships with her through the immense gravity wells surrounding the gate. He had of course argued against sending the fleet, he hadn't really taken to the idea of leaving Hiigara temptingly open but Karen S'jet insisted herself. The political weight, Karen comandeered was enough in it's own right to over ride the Admiral so he allowed it. Now here we are, people missing, strange sightings, gates opening by themselves. We should never have unlocked a door when we didn't know what was on the other side. 'Bring up the star chart for me, showing me the locations of the 3 sightings' He ordered. The main monitor flashed up the information he asked for. 'Zoom out and include the location of Hiigara and the location of the gate' he added. As thought the monitor itself was obeying the command it showed the relevant information. Why am I not suprised? Thats about as straight a line as your gonna get he thought to himself. 'Where is the planet with the missing personal in respect to the gate and the sightings?' by this time a few of the officer's were catching on as to where the Grand Admiral was taking this. More eyes were looking on the monitor as it flashed up the location of the planet.
Right between the gate and the sightings, My god, I've seen this before. This is a military tactic. This was one of Commander Sayer's military tactics. 'Send an urgent message to the Redemption, Commander Harbison is to leave immediately with Commander Ren and head directly back to Hiigara, Also send word to the Crossfire, same orders. Send it now!'

Commander Sayer stood on the bridge of the LSC-Apocalypse and watched as an Interceptor squad performed a fly-by past the front of the ship. He smiled to himself, remembering the times he spent in a fighter. He thought back to the day he was found alone in his Pegasus class fighter, A fighter that has never once matched any other kind of fighter in the Military's database. What made that more strange was the fact he just couldn't remember any further back. He remember's waking up in his cockpit, all his systems were fried and he was just drifting in space. How he got there is a total mystery to him, It's as if he just appeared smack bang in the middle of the Hiigaran's war with the Vaygr. He was found by Commander Harbison who, by sheer chance, dropped out of hyperspace right on top of him to perform repairs on the Redemption. He was taken aboard, at first he was mistaken as a spy because of the unknown classifications of his ship. Commander Harbison had him on the bridge while he personally questioned him when they were hit by a suprise attack by a Vaygr carrier with a full compliment of fighters. He watched the fight unfold when he noticed a weakness in the attacking styles of the fighters. Obviously an inexperienced crew and pilots were trying to bring down a Battlecruiser to try and gain some form of a reputation, he had thought to himself at the time. He pointed out to Commander Harbison what he had seen, which itself was hard work considering he couldn't speak the same language. The Redemption was able to take down the carrier and capture half the pilots while the others either fled or were destroyed. After this he was taken to see Karen S'Jet, Sajuuk's intergrated pilot. Karen delved into his mind with her ever growing telepathic abilities to see what he was about and inadvertantly passed on the Hiigaran language, Alarmed by this Karen stopped the telepathic link. With his new found language skills he explained in detail what he tried to tell Harbison at the skirmish with the Vagyr carrier. This raised his profile within the command and was recruited as a tactical officer, bringing in many victories and deploying several strategies previously unthought of. It wasn't long before he was given command of the newly built LSC-Apocalypse and entered the war from a frontline perspective. After gaining such a reputation to match that of the most senior officers, the Apocalypse fleet was born. Consisting of three battlecruisers, the Apocalypse, Colossus and Vengeance along with 2 carriers, the Crossfire and Severance. Smaller than the typical fleet but considered the most deadly under his command. Now here he was in a region of unknown space, god knows how far from home. If I can call it home that is? Maybe Karen can tell me later where i come from.
He looked out from the bridge again at the goliath ship at the front of the escort formation the Apocalypse fleet was flying, The Sajuuk. Hiigara's flagship and most powerful weapon. The Sajuuk practically finished off the remaining Vaygr forces by herself. He marvelled at it's design, as he always does. The Sajuuk and the Apocalypse fleet had gone through the ancient hyperspace gate and found the vast hyperspace network beyond it. Looking like none of the gates had been used in millenia, Karen chose the nearest gate to go through and now they were here, in unknown space. Unknown but looking for all the world like they were still home. This new region had no distinguishing features or any signs of life but they were here to explore so thats what they had been doing for the past month. Making jumps so far from the secong gate and dropping research probes to record any activity so they could come back at a later date. Commander Sayer turned from the main viewing screen to head for the hangar bay. He had an appointment with Karen to keep and hopefully some answers to find. Come what may, we'll be leaving for the gate in a few more days. We might find something a little more interesting past the next gate.

Apocalypse
May 6, 2005, @ 05:03 PM
The destroyers were returning from their positions to fall into formation behind the LSC-Justice. Commander Ren had just docked with the Justice and was heading up towards the bridge. He was wondering about the transmission from Grand Admiral Brandt, ordering immediate withdrawal. I only just got here and now we're being ordered back? The Admiral doesn't order a withdrawal lightly, Whats going on out here? He arrived at the bridge and saluted to his bridge officers, who were standing to attention. 'As you were' he spoke clearly. 'Nav, is my fleet ready?'
'LSC-Law will be here and in position in 20 minutes, sir' came the immediate reply.
'Good, set destination for the homeworld as soon as she's in position'
'Sir' the nav officer obeyed.
Out towards the planet, Commander Ren could see the Redemption coming about. Commander Harbison was just waiting for the ground crew to pack up and join the fearsome looking battlecruiser. 'Comms, how long till the Crossfire gets here?' he asked.
'The Crossfire should arrive within the hour, sir'
'Put me through to the Redemption' He ordered. The comm's officer did as ordered and flicked a few switches.
'Commander Harbison,' Ren continued 'The Crossfire won't be here for roughly 50 minutes, do you suppose they would have received the message to withdraw?' he asked.
'More than likely Commander, The Redemption will stand by and wait for their arrival nonetheless, we still have the ground crew to pick up yet. Leave for Hiigara when ready, we'll follow as soon as possible, Harbison out' came the reply. Ren turned around to head to his private quarters 'Alert me if any unusual happens in the next 20 minutes, if not take us home' He said to the nav officer, who saluted in reply. Ren walked off the bridge and headed to his room.

Flo was banging around under the control console, fiddling with wires and dropping several curses while doing so. Tank emerged from the back, looking a little black from the grease and grime of the engine room. 'Flo, I really don't know why the engines have failed? I've looked it over from top to bottom and there shouldn't be a problem. It's like it just refuses to power on. I don't get it?' he looked out towards the barely visable smudge in space, 'Do you think that thing has anything to do with it?'
Flo cursed once more and wriggled out from underneath the controls, 'I'll bet my life it has. I've been thinking about it, the scanners picked up a power source while we were powered down. We didn't detect anything before so i think whatever it is, has reacted towards us' Flo took a look at the scanners again, 'See here, the readings are gradually rising. Even the station should have picked it up by now. So whatever it's doing, it's affecting the engines' he went on 'I don't know, something is going on here but i can't get my head round it, these power readings are strange. About 2 minutes ago there was a spike in the power and I'm pretty sure that was a transmission but the rest is beyond me'
'A transmission to who though?' Tank asked.
'Tank, I can't even see what that thing is, how the hell am i supposed to know?' Flo snapped.
Hardly fazed by Flo's sudden anger, Tank looked out into space again. He could see the station in the distance looking fairly idle. He turned towards the thing that was interferring with the engines. What ever it was, it had pretty much got them trapped. We're trapped here like a fly in a web he thought to himself, staring at the nothingness infront of him. Suddenly he flicked the comm switch 'Kyle, Launch the defense platforms now!' he shouted into the comm's device.
'Tank, what for? there's nothing out there apart from your little find' the reply crackled back to him.
'Do it now.......' before Tank could finish his sentence, three bright lights appeared out in the distance, between the station and the corvette. The lights grew into swirling plates of energy, not much bigger than the corvette itself. 'What the hell are those?!' Flo shouted. As if in reply, what looked to be three ships, burst out of the spinning wheels of fused light. Flo and Tank tried to see what kind of ships they were but they were too far awar for a detailed look. They appeared to be no bigger than a standard fighter and left no engine trails behind them. Flo looked towards the station, platforms were beginning to emerge and power up but it looked like they wouldn't get them out in time. Just as predicted, Flo saw an orange ball of flame appear as one the platforms exploded. 'Jesus, their attacking the station! We got to do something?' Tank said, sounding very nervous as more explosions could be seen. The ships glided all round the station battering the hull with alien weaponry. The comm system crackled into life 'Flo we're under attack, we can't get the platforms out in time. We're losing pressure. Get out of there.........' the comm system fell silent.
'Get to the hangar and put your suits on, we'll get there as soon as' Flo barked down the comm. Tank was still looking out towards the drama that was unfolding before them. 'Flo, the communication array has been hit, they can't hear us!'
'They might have heard us! We have to get this ship moving now!' Flo shouted at Tank.
'It's too late, Flo, Look' Tank pointed out towards the station. The station was falling apart, fire errupting all over the surface. The three ships still fired with devastating effect. A huge flare of light almost blinded Tank as a massive explosion tore through the middle of the station, where the main power supply was located, ripping it in two. A second huge explosion decimated the lower half, propelling the top half away from it's original position. Debris from the lower half flew out in all directions with immense speed. A burnt piece of metal that used to be part of the hull, flew towards the stranded corvette. Flo gripped onto the console, closed his eyes and braced himself for the impact. He heard a loud clanging noise but felt no impact. He looked out again to see that the burnt slab of metal had actually collided with the device outside the corvette, and had reflected away from the ship. The impact seemed to have damaged the anomaly as it had dropped it's cloak and was revealed to Tank and Flo. It was very much alien in design and angular but they couldn't make much detail out of it, the colours on it's surface blended well into the darkness of space. It seemed to have been disabled as there was no longer any kind of power reading coming from the device. Tank ran over the pilot's chair and dropped in while simultaneously flicking switches. The engines roared into life, the ship was free. 'Tank get us over there now, there might be survivors!' Flo shouted.
'Flo, nothing could have survived that and what are we supposed to do against those fighters? We're in an unarmed vessel for god's sake. No we have to get to the nearest fleet and warn someone, anyone' Tank snapped back.
He looked out again to see the remains of the station become sheathed in flame and said a silent prayer for his friends. He turned the ship about and gave full power to the engines. Flo sat in the co-pilots chair without a word, looking deflated as he did so. He brought the rear view up on his monitor to see three lights wink out behind them. 'They've gone, i think' he sighed and put his head in his hands. Tank, still silent, checked the the star chart for the nearest system and punched in the co-ordinates. Putting the ship on auto pilot, he switched on the distress signal, hoping anyone was near enough to pick it up. The corvette powered on mournfully towards it's destination.

Apocalypse
May 6, 2005, @ 05:07 PM
Chapter 2 : Crossfire among crossfire

' The Crossfire should be here any moment, sir ',
' Thank you Comms and what of the ground team? ', Replied Harbison.
' Docking as we speak, sir ', Came the quick reply.
' Excellent, Lt.Co Blacksand, please go to the hanger and see to the debriefing of the ground crew. See what they found out ', Harbison turned to face Blacksand as he gave a salute and headed off to the hanger bays. He turned back to the comms officer, ' Ok, send a message to Commander Ren. Tell him we shall be heading back to Hiigara momentarily, He may jump ahead of us. ', Harbison said while turning to the navs officer ' have us turn about and set co-ordinates for Hiigara, prepare to jump on my command ', He said. Harbison was still trying to shake the uneasy feeling of being watched and walked over to the front of the bridge and looked out into space. Nothing but stars and distant nebulas lay infront of him. Looking down towards the planet below him, vainly trying to find some answer to his uneasiness. ' Navs, do a sensor sweep of the entire area ', He said. The Navs officer did as he was told but just as before he found nothing. Before navs could reply the comms station beeped. ' Message received from Commander Ren, He's preparing to jump his fleet, sir ', The comms officer said. Harbison looked at the man, a little too eager at times he thought to himself but a good officer nonetheless. ' Understood, Navs, anything? ', He focused his attention back to sensor station.
' No sir, nothing out of the ordinary ', came the reply. Harbison sighed to himself, Where is the Crossfire, I want to get back to command and find out whats going on. I don't like this one bit. Suddenly the sensor station pinged into life, ' Sir, were picking up a power reading but from all the information we're receiving it's coming from the middle of nothing?!',
' Excuse me? nothing? How about a touch of clarification, officer ', Harbison sternly replied.
' Well sir, the reading's there all right, but the co-ordinates it's giving, well there's nothing there sir ', the officer was sounding more nervous. A cloaking device maybe? Harbison thought to himself ' Send a scout to investigate, any idea what that reading is? ' He asked the Nav officer.
' The analysis is coming through now sir, It seems to be a signal of some sort, unknown to the database.......' The Nav officer was abruptly cut off by the sensor's station 'Sir we have multiple signals appearing all around the source of the signal! ',
Harbison looked out into space again and in the far distance he could just make out several pinpoints of light appearing, ' Zoom in on the main screen ', He said, feeling a little anxious now. He looked towards the main viewing screen to roughly 12 or so spinning disks of light. ' What the hell are those? ', He asked no-one in particular. several small craft burst out of the spinning vortex's and started to immiediately circle each other in some bizarre flight pattern, almost like they were dancing with each other. ' Red Alert! Bring the Redemption to battle readyness, Launch the fighters but do not engage yet What are they doing? ', He ordered and questioned at the same time. As if on cue, the fighters suddenly broke off from their dance and headed straight towards the Battlecruiser. ' Sir we're receiving word from Commander Ren, they've aborted the jump and turning back to form a defensive formation around us ', the comms officer said.
' They may not be hostile, nobody fires a shot until my command! ' Harbison barked back..........

Apocalypse
May 6, 2005, @ 05:08 PM
Saving space for story III

Apocalypse
May 9, 2005, @ 06:30 AM
Saving space for story IV. More tonight. Note, I have many characters that need filling, if you want a place in my story, post your real name along with your nicks that you have used.

Foree
May 9, 2005, @ 10:37 AM
f o r e e

hero
May 9, 2005, @ 10:50 AM
Hero

or do you want my real live name or what?

Apocalypse
May 9, 2005, @ 06:34 PM
real name. (e.g. Daniel Harbison)
typical game names that you use. (e.g. Drunk, Drunkenone)
Email addies (optional) (e.g. Redemption@emailaddress.com <--- Fake)

You see, even tho the story is totally fictional and based on an impossible scenario (crossover universe, i think it's called) I want to try and keep a real feel to the characters. Take Commander Harbison for instance, Daniel Harbison = Drunkenone, Drunkenone doesn't make a good story name, but his older nick 'Drunk' makes for a good nickname to be used in the story so i don't have to keep typing Commander Harbison all the time, which gives the story structure too much of a stiff appearance. LSC-Redemption is the ship he commands in the story, Redemption comes from his email address and also sounds like a kickass name you would give a capital cruiser.

so....

Commander Daniel (Drunk) Harbison of the LSC-Redemption is born from the info i have on him, also sounding like a possible real character.

Apocalypse
May 16, 2005, @ 07:29 PM
Not finished the update yet but i will before the night's over, got a fair bit to type. Done a bit of rewording.

Apocalypse
May 16, 2005, @ 07:53 PM
I'm in urgent need of pilots and a shortage of characters to fill them, fancy yourself as a pilot then sign up now. Same info required.

Foree
May 16, 2005, @ 08:02 PM
I don't think that Vladislav Foree Lukasiewicz [spelled lukazeewich :P] would look nice as a character name... :|but if you want... feel free.

Scorpion
May 16, 2005, @ 08:05 PM
yeh dood pilot...

my name is crap so just call me Robert ( Bobert ) Platt-Higgins ( real person who i borrow his identity from time to time.... )

p.s i no ur watching me!!!

Apocalypse
May 16, 2005, @ 08:07 PM
I don't think that Vladislav Foree Lukasiewicz [spelled lukazeewich :P] would look nice as a character name... :|but if you want... feel free.

Nope, not as a pilot but you have given me a perfect character for elsewhere in the story.

yeh dood pilot...

my name is crap so just call me Robert ( Bobert ) Platt-Higgins ( real person who i borrow his identity from time to time.... )

p.s i no ur watching me!!!

Whats your real name? you'd be suprised how well i can make you sound if you give me the info i need (look up to find the post with my example) there are various ways i can make you sound good. I haven't written anything like this for over 10 years but i think im getting the hang of it.

Foree
May 16, 2005, @ 08:21 PM
Nope, not as a pilot but you have given me a perfect character for elsewhere in the story.

Im getting scared of this.

Scorpion
May 16, 2005, @ 08:25 PM
okay my real name is

Samuel John Crich people call me SCorpian bcus... well i dont really know...?
-cry-ch-

Apocalypse
May 16, 2005, @ 08:26 PM
okay my real name is

Samuel John Crich people call me SCorpian bcus... well i dont really know...?
-cry-ch-

and a pilot you shall be.

Scorpion
May 16, 2005, @ 08:31 PM
and a pilot you shall be.
ty

tell me the ending..... go on....

Apocalypse
May 16, 2005, @ 08:34 PM
you die.

Scorpion
May 16, 2005, @ 08:42 PM
cool

Justice
May 16, 2005, @ 08:47 PM
I'm a destroyer captain.

Excellent.

cheers, and
-=</|Awesome Party!|\>=-

Foree
May 16, 2005, @ 09:08 PM
and thou shalt be destroyed


';..;'

Apocalypse
May 23, 2005, @ 07:19 PM
My god.

Apocalypse
May 23, 2005, @ 08:11 PM
Chapter 1 is over with, so much difficulty writing such a simple piece. Criticism would be good right about now. If you think something doesn't sound right, point it out to me.

Apocalypse
Jul 5, 2005, @ 02:17 PM
Bump, forgot all about this. Will try and get some done later on. Please please give me so advice on my writing as im just not too good at it yet. Criticism is much appreciated.

Lucid Angel
Jul 5, 2005, @ 02:59 PM
You can always send me the drafts you write and I'll go through them with you, as you've done before ;)

Foree
Jul 5, 2005, @ 03:01 PM
I have an advice, I think you should implement.
- Try to make it more readable - foree said - It's somehow hard to find where are dialogues and where is the narration.
- That should do it - replied foree #2

NeBuLaDiStOrTiOn
Jul 5, 2005, @ 03:07 PM
is this a different one? i remember being in one of these, but i think justice wrote it, and that was a long time ago on the old forums.

Apocalypse
Jul 5, 2005, @ 03:22 PM
This is my own work, Neb. You'll be in it somewhere but i'll have to find my notes because i've forgotten. Ok foree, i'll do that.

Will do Lucid, thanks.

Spulm
Jul 5, 2005, @ 03:48 PM
nickname: Spulm
real name: Martijn Schutter

let me be kamikaze pilot or something, and everybody will cry cuz I died... or stuff....

M.

Apocalypse
Jul 5, 2005, @ 04:10 PM
Great name Spulm, Got plans for you already now.

Justice
Jul 5, 2005, @ 06:08 PM
Schutter ...

Cool name :)

cheers, and
-=</|Awesome Party!|\>=-

Bentusi
Jul 5, 2005, @ 06:31 PM
Name: Daniel Stewart (and no, I'm not lying this time :) )

Callsign: Bentusi

and apoc, I see exactly where this is heading. Props for combining my 2 favorite games, I wonder who would win, Colossus vs. Sajuuk?

Speedracer71
Jul 5, 2005, @ 06:32 PM
if u feel like ruining your story, you can put me in there.


Speedracer71,
Speedy71,
Speedy,
or Speed

Apocalypse
Jul 5, 2005, @ 06:44 PM
Bent. If you truly know where my story is heading, I'll be very Impressed. As for the Colossus, I doubt i could use it seeing as it was destroyed and a ship of that size and power to be resurrected in this tale is just inprobable. You never know tho ;)

Colossus vs Sajuuk? I reckon the Colossus would win. Sure the Sajuuk has a powerful bastard ray of death but thats nothing compared to taking a pounding from a sathanas' 4 beams and living. Plus the colossus would just rip the fuck out of the Sajuuk with all it's weaponry and it would take out any fighters with it's flacks, any corvs with it's missiles and any frigates with it's lasers. it's beams for the sajuuk. Colossus wins vs Sajuuk and fleet never mind just Sajuuk.

Speedy? what game do you play so i can place your character better?

Bentusi
Jul 5, 2005, @ 06:53 PM
lol, the colossus never took direct hits from the Sathanas, not unless you were a crap bomber pilot :)

or until the end, but it died in 2 seconds then..

Apocalypse
Jul 5, 2005, @ 07:28 PM
I played the game so many times and wanted to see how a full health Colossus would fair against the fully armed Sathanas. I ordered all ships to stay on my wing or something, it was a while ago but the Colossus won. Barely.

Bentusi
Jul 5, 2005, @ 07:31 PM
really?

In that 1 mission clash of the whatever I always saw the Colossus get punished in the short amount of time it took me to destroy the sathanass's remaining beam weapons, and take eons to take out the sathanass

Apocalypse
Jul 5, 2005, @ 07:36 PM
It's a rareity. Doesn't happen most of the time, but the Big battles actually play differently everytime you play sometimes the difference is only slight and sometimes the difference is severe. The only sure thing is when the big cap ships die in certain levels like when the colossus dies. Story events and such. I know it's possible cos i did it. But no matter what you do, you can't stop the colossus from dieing.

[edit] oh actually come to think about it, i think i did have a hand in the colossus winning unaided. I might have played with certain files. I did a lot of that also, it really was a long time ago.

NeBuLaDiStOrTiOn
Jul 5, 2005, @ 07:53 PM
i want to be neb the resource collector and then bombers come and get me! and i get hurt! BUT THEN! ... i dock.

elliot/obee1
Jul 5, 2005, @ 08:07 PM
obee, obee1, Elliot, tater salad

Bentusi
Jul 5, 2005, @ 08:10 PM
I wanted FS3 sooo bad. Why the hell did they terminate the series

Apocalypse
Jul 5, 2005, @ 08:26 PM
I wanted FS3 sooo bad. Why the hell did they terminate the series

OMG i would get divorced for such a game!!!!!!!!!!

Juggalo
Jul 5, 2005, @ 08:31 PM
:blink:

FS3? :ponder:

Foree
Jul 5, 2005, @ 08:58 PM
Freespace3

Lucid Angel
Jul 5, 2005, @ 09:01 PM
Freespace 3!

That would be an awesome game!

Juggalo
Jul 5, 2005, @ 09:07 PM
Ahhhhhhhh, thought so...

Justice
Jul 5, 2005, @ 11:52 PM
Neb should commit suicide in the story.

cheers, and
-=</|Awesome Party!|\>=-

Juggalo
Jul 6, 2005, @ 12:22 AM
Murder-suicide, killing you in the process. ;)

NeBuLaDiStOrTiOn
Jul 6, 2005, @ 12:59 AM
YA!

Bentusi
Jul 6, 2005, @ 12:59 AM
then polaris should come over, scream "Oh god why", and slit his wrists.

Then we just have a random shot of karma getting shot in the backround and the scene is complete.

elliot/obee1
Jul 6, 2005, @ 01:17 AM
i killed all the sathanasses turets, not a scratcxh on the collossus, but the next mission..........65% on it. On the first freespace i killed the lucifer 10 missions before...........didnt count lol

ITS AN AWESOME GAME THOUGH

Juggalo
Jul 6, 2005, @ 01:19 AM
The scene wouldn't be complete with out DJ having sex with something. *eyes the corpse of Karma* Nevermind, we're good. :up:

Speedracer71
Jul 6, 2005, @ 02:51 AM
i basically play only HW2, unfortunately, im a deprived child :(

Bentusi
Jul 6, 2005, @ 03:03 AM
i wish they make a freespace 3..

imagine how sweet it would be if they merged planet and space dogfighting, where you'd deploy on the planet or off a destroyers, and actually fly up/down through the atmosphere..

omegachiken
Jul 6, 2005, @ 06:41 AM
would be awesome i jus scrounged out my copy of hegemonia and been glued to it again x.x btw nice story apoc ;)

eXoRciSt
Jul 6, 2005, @ 10:19 AM
Demon

Jake Lee

me me the local idiot or devil or somethin

Burning
Jul 6, 2005, @ 10:09 PM
do you take pen names?

Bentusi
Jul 6, 2005, @ 10:44 PM
bruning, it doesn't matter, no way for them to differentiate between a fake and truth on the internet.

omegachiken
Jul 6, 2005, @ 11:30 PM
the internet be a cruel mistress

Apocalypse
Jul 7, 2005, @ 01:55 AM
If you want a character in my story then provide me with the following;

Real name or real sounding name;
First part of your email address, i.e. Bricard_uk not bricard_uk@hotmail.com
Prefered type of character, i.e. pilot, marine, officer

I prefer to introduce characters by a real name or real sounding name first before i start using nicks and such.

Main characters are filled by TLSC members And most of the Captial cruiser commanders are taken already so don't ask for those.

I've had to stop writing cos there are too many inaccuracies in the plot already so i've gone back to hw2 and freespace 2 to bone up on the plotlines, they merge nicely but i need to go back and find out the bits i've forgotten.

Once done, i'll do some re-writing on what i've done so far then continue the story with more accurate details. Christ, i'd forgotten how badly trhe ending to hw2 sucked. You'll know when i've done more work by checking the thread title for the update bit.

Bentusi
Jul 7, 2005, @ 01:59 AM
apoc, just stick me in a cool spot wherever :)

I'll be happy being a commodore or sumsuch :wink:

Speedracer71
Jul 7, 2005, @ 02:38 AM
ok then, my updated info:

Tom Valentin
Skifastr11
Pilot / Officer

Delta
Jul 7, 2005, @ 03:37 AM
nick: Delta

Name: Brandon....

Email: DeltaForce

Prefered type: Special ops fleet commander ;) come on now u gotta love the spec ops stuff flying in with a fleet of no more then 20 into a fleet of 10000 :Up: fun stuff


so when do i get to come in ;)

Morpheus
Jul 7, 2005, @ 06:08 AM
i wish they make a freespace 3..

imagine how sweet it would be if they merged planet and space dogfighting, where you'd deploy on the planet or off a destroyers, and actually fly up/down through the atmosphere..

I think the new Star Wars game is the RTS in space where you get to do surface battles, too.

ilia
Jul 7, 2005, @ 08:56 AM
ilia

nick: Raven

first part of e-mail: ilia1986 o_0

Prefered type: Spec-ops marine :P

omegachiken
Jul 7, 2005, @ 09:02 AM
name:Jake Weeks

email:omegachiken(jus use the omega part)

prefered type:officer or covert ops

anything cool would be nice apoc =P

Bentusi
Jul 7, 2005, @ 09:47 AM
I think the new Star Wars game is the RTS in space where you get to do surface battles, too.

yes, but FS2 was a twitch space sim, not a RTS

Burning
Jul 7, 2005, @ 05:36 PM
alright then

name: adam chan
e-mail: valorgaurd@yahoo.com
preference: fighter pilot!!! (me <3 fighters)

Foree
Jul 7, 2005, @ 06:06 PM
Nope, not as a pilot but you have given me a perfect character for elsewhere in the story.

Just reminding :)

omegachiken
Jul 7, 2005, @ 10:31 PM
lol

Burning
Jul 9, 2005, @ 02:39 AM
apoc is this a book or are you just writing for fun?

Bentusi
Jul 31, 2005, @ 05:13 PM
bump, must not let it go past page 2 and thus be erased!

Juggalo
Jul 31, 2005, @ 06:00 PM
Sticky it. ;)

Apocalypse
Aug 2, 2005, @ 07:39 PM
Hadn't forgot about this. Just trying to rewrite the 1st chapter now i now remember the ending to hw2. Make it a little more accurate but im struggling a little, may have to redo the whole thing.

omegachiken
Aug 2, 2005, @ 11:00 PM
*cracks whip* WORK FASTER! lol :D

Apocalypse
Aug 2, 2005, @ 11:43 PM
apoc is this a book or are you just writing for fun?

Just for fun, nowhere near good enough to write a book.

omegachiken
Aug 3, 2005, @ 04:18 AM
its good still mate

Bentusi
Aug 3, 2005, @ 04:38 AM
yeah, whens the next peice comin?

omegachiken
Aug 3, 2005, @ 06:27 AM
yea we wanna know!

Apocalypse
Aug 3, 2005, @ 05:24 PM
Ok it's been decided that im re-writing the whole thing. Similar plot but different beginning.

Lt_Omega
Aug 3, 2005, @ 06:03 PM
K now might be a good time to offer my services:

Real Name: Steve Bayer (pronounced a-la bayern with out the n)

Ingame nicks: Lt_Omega, Lieutenant_Omega, Lieutenant_Commander Omega (post of second in command in a naval flight squadron)

Email: Lt_Omega@hotmail.com/omegastrike@hotmail.com